Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Free choice Writing

This is my Free choice Writing. I am going to show this with you because it is my best writing on my own.
I am proud of this because I used great punctuation.

Free Choice Writing- Tyla
Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas
Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation
  • Include simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

The Little girl

Once upon a time there was little girl named Tracy she always loved Animals every day and night she snuck out of her bed and Jumped out her window she got all her animals And Chucked them on her bed.  played with them all night until 6.00 am Then she grabbed all her animals  Put them in there cage and jumped back in her window and and hopped back into bed and went back to sleep.  Her mum came in to wake her up and she saw with her two eyes she looked down and the little puppy was peeing right on her foot then she hears her mum bursting out her name Tracy!!!. She jumps Straight up and says good bye mum have fun cleaning it up and she sprints out of her bed and opens her window Jumps and Run fast as she can then her mum Comes running super fast and gets her and says you are … not ground!!! Tracy says yay!!!. Two weeks later her birthday is here she is turning 8 her mum brings her presents out  the night before her birthday what does Tracy do now. She gets soap sprays it all over the new carpet it was sticky like no one will walk on there she hears her mum coming down the hallway and Tracy has no way to get back to her Room.