Friday, July 28, 2017

Bully Story

HI guys welcome back I am sorry I have not posted in a while but anyways. Today I am going to be sharing with you guys my Bully Story. 

The day the bully stopped.

Make sure your story:

  • Has a beginning, middle and end
  • A problem and a solution
  • Some awesome vocabulary

Write your story in the box below.

One day there was a 10 year old boy named Daxton. Who had Rough time at his school caused of bullying. It all started when he was 8 years old when he stumble down the stairs at school. He got caught falling down the stairs from 3 boys named Darren, Max, Coby who started calling him names and everything you can think of. Daxton was to scared to tell his mum what was happening to him at school so Daxton just started ignoring the bullies so they get no reaction.

One day the bullies thought they can tell people that Daxton fell down the stairs at school because he was clumsy and fat. Then a lot of People started to bully him so he thought to himself that he can start a bully story how he was getting bullied from 3 boys. Daxton thought it would be a great great idea to do it and write a story about it. It took Daxton so long to write the story it took him about around 3 weeks to 6 weeks.

When Daxton was fished his story he thought he can share his story with the class when the bullies were not there so he did. Then it got so popular that he got to share it to the Whole school. When his bullies found out it was them bullying him they looked back what they had done to him. So they decided to write a sorry letter to him and give him a box of chocolates when they gave it to Daxton, Daxton said thank you guys for giving me a Sorry letter and a box of chocolates to me I really appreciated. The bullies were proud that they gave it to him.  


  1. Great description Tyla!I love how you described who the bullies stopped bullying and it was very entertaining.Love the work!Keep it up!

  2. Wow Tyla! That was a really descriptive story about bullying and these things actually happen. I like how you put the success criteria and followed it by putting a beginning, middle, and end. The story also had a problem and a resolution and it defiantly had AWESOME vocabulary so I think you have nailed the success criteria. Keep up the good work:)